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LOL. It was the order that threw me off... girls don't generally order that quantity of food. I mean, I'm sure some do, but you have that whole weight and ...

Hahaha, actually, it's a senryu, which is a humorous haiku! Or something like that. Also, this is a pretty old poem! I'm going to lock it so that more people ...

Yay! A historical play! That's what Shakespeare wrote for the most part, you know? ;) Anyway, as far as this play goes, I think I want more. Your story is ...

What would be more poetic, actually, is you throwing everything away except for the last stanza. So you would cut all the fat and go straight to the main part ...

Yes! There is a way! But it's a bit of a hassle in several ways. We don't actually want users to change their names because it can change the code ...

Hey sare! :D My favorite stanza was the fourth. It was lots of wonderful sensory images that I just adored and, from all the descriptions, you could imagine the relationship ...

Haha, this reminds me of some of my old poems to get into a character's head. Although, like this poem, it wasn't very poetic at all. XD Conflict and such ...

Haha, it totally does sound unrealistic! :D But it does make sense that it was for World War I as opposed to World War II. That wouldn't have happened in ...

Hey nayex! Lovely poem! I really like the words used and the ideas involved and pretty much all the content. It's quite lovely! The only thing that kind of irks ...

Hey Dante! Maybe this is just me, but I would like to read less about how you're bearing your soul to us and more bared soul... if that makes sense. ...

Hey Eli! So! This story! This story is about poker! In fact, it's about a woman playing poker. Poker isn't really interesting in itself... it really isn't. What is interesting, ...

It really is quite terrible, yes. He's not the only one... there are many other stories like that. I know that on occasion, Nate will post some of these stories ...

Yay for dystopian worlds! Your teacher sounds awesome. :) I agree with Alteran! You definitely need more focus. And I say this with love! I hate to say this because ...

Hey Passion! Nice to see you back. :) Yep. Proofreading is your friend. Though I can totally understand if you make lots of mistakes... you should see some of the ...

Hey Stori! I don't know... I didn't really find this descriptive. It felt like you were trying to describe everything at once in as few words as possible, but I ...