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Re: I can hold a rainbow.
It's probably a synthetic glass crystal! I would dark the over-exposed patch right above the crystal. Right now, it seems a bit... white and it doesn't really have neat contrast, ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Birds of a Feather
Eek, I wish this had a happy ending! Not that you can actually help it, seeing that this is nonfiction, but whatever. My over-idealistic side of me wants it to ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Scammed
Hey Mike! Try formatting it like this: Aaron is walking down fifty-third street where he saw someone at a garage sale giving away mysterious objects. He saw one thing that ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Would You Rather?
Snake! Would you rather kiss a dog or a cat?
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Katie's Puddles
Hey VioletJune! Haha... sleep dialing. I don't do that, but I do do a lot of sleep-deprived dialing! It makes for strange conversations. Anyway, higher education? Are they in college, ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon III (Episode I)
Control Room: ALARM SOUNDS. "The door's locked and we have twenty seconds to defuse this bomb, MacGruber!" "The name's not MacGruber... it's Snoink. Give me that tape." "No! This bomb, ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Nominations Area Makeover
Yay! This makes me happy.
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Knights of Dawn Prologue part 3
I'll move this to novels, pre-emptively. ;)
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Scholarly papers concerning the possibility of vampires
This contains the names and titles of the scholarly papers that are currently out about the possible existence of vampires, plus a brief synopsis of each paper. Enjoy!
May 15, 2010 -
Re: snoink born in 1969? :? Look!
Whaaaaaaa?
May 14, 2010 -
Re: 2009 YWS Awards Winners!
*moved to The Lounge*
May 12, 2010 -
Re: The Bus
Hey TheThing! This is a very stilted poem. That's fine and all, but really, I was hoping for more drama. You have a very square kind of narrator who seems ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: "Synesthesia"- The Sirens
Hey Ryan! I have to admit, I really like this poem. You obviously spent a lot of time crafting it and it shows. It rolls off easily from the tongue ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Mermaids are evil
Hey curiousvampire! I'm not an artist at all, but I just wanted to say that I adored this. From the cheeky look the mermaid has to the desperate look the ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Promised Place
Hey Kanade! :D Hmm... I like the lines, but they seem a little disjointed as they are together! I would probably reorder the sequence of the poem to: I had ...
May 12, 2010
