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That hat is awesome... and that snake bracelet is also awesome. *flails*

Hey Risfel! First, a grammatical comment! You do what I do! You skip words. For instance: "Now go forth....and let them [ahh, where's the verb????] that you are my horror ...

Okay! So, I wrote a radio script. Not exactly a play, but whatever. Anyway, a page (correctly formatted) is generally one minute, if it's straight dialogue. If it's NOT straight ...

Why would he indeed! If I were a dragon, I would only eat her if I had a large quantity of teriyaki sauce. Yum! Anyway, first of all, you need ...

Aww, and I really wanted to look at this poem too! :) Aristotle, we don't allow uploads of powerpoints and we won't see powerpoints either! Try converting it to PDF. ...

Teehee, yes, but what does that mean, if it doesn't mean anything? ;) Anyway, you're repeating the same structure again and again in your short couplets! This is good... if ...

Hey Arahnia! This is a beautiful, still poem! And by still, I mean the synonym for quiet, not anything weird. It's pretty! I love how you begin with those first ...

Hahaha, what a great name for such a cat! He looks rather upset... like someone forgot to put a dryer sheet in when he was put in the dryer. XD ...

Hey icanbefixed! :D Okay! I love your description of the silly boy who can make the narrator smile and laugh, and yet is completely oblivious to the obvious! I think ...

Hahaha, that's an awesome boat! But you need more focus! We can the background better than the actual boat! :o Maybe you can take the picture of the boat from ...

Hey Fairy! This was lovely! I loved, loved, loved the shape that you did! It kind of reminded me of this one Christmas tree poem... and this wheelbarrow poem... and ...

Hey Esther! You've listened to the song, so you know what it sounds like, but we changed the lyrics to smooth it out and get rid of the awkward lines ...

Teehee, this is fun!

Let yourself write crap. Yes, it'll be awful. But writing crap is the first step to writing anything good.

Hey Cherry! I would describe the "they" that you introduce in the very first sentence, just because I can't really imagine the cross through the desert. Also, I can't really ...