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Also! To develop this poem more, as far as the mathematical romance theme you have going on here... check out this: It has a bunch of ridiculous (yet hilarious!) pick ...

Hi Silented! I really like the math parts and I wish you would continue more of the math! Like... you go from addition to fractions to algebra. OMG. And then! ...

Hey tgolden! I voted "kind of." That is, I really love Spanish in poetry. I do! Spanish poetry is what brought me into poetry in the first place! However, I ...

Hey, I can't help it if I taste like bacon. ;) Woooooo! Free hugs! :D I think you click "subscribe to topic." It should be on the very top of ...

That's because capitalization counts! Next time, capitalize it. :P

Hey Unknown! The main problem is that this pretends to be witty when it really isn't. Better poets have constructed her crazier un-poems than this with more imagination and daring ...

I don't think the French thing is a problem. But Jas having two avvies... now that's a bit odd!

Dude, you had me at sparkly magical ponies. Welcome to YWS, oh strange one! Remember! Cannibalism is strictly not allowed. So AVOID EATING THE SWINE.

I suppose I could get more help if I posted the rest of the story, though? :P Hahaha! Trust me, if this means you'll post more, I'll say yes. :P ...

Hey Darkangel! :D So! I think you rushed this a bit too much and that's why you're not satisfied with it. I mean, you meet the guy, you meet Jennifer, ...

Hey Lava! The nose is really piggy! I don't know whether this is supposed to be the case or what, but it looks like she doesn't really have any nose ...

Wow, I love how you did the hair! A couple of little things... she doesn't really have a nose and the smile, coupled with the wide eyes, looks a bit ...

It does look like fractal art, lol! Still, I gotta love the math joke. ;) I really like the tears in the middle, but the best of it is kind ...

Eek! I love super human stories! You're a good writer too, which makes it even better! :D First of all, modly stuff! That is, I'm a mod. I rated it ...

And I've been working to get a blue. Waah. D= Sixteen more left! :o