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Hey Jarred! I think it would be better for you to just get rid of the prologue and let us dive into the juicier parts of the book. After all, ...

Aww! I love poems from parents about their kids. :) So cute! The main thing is that it says your "strong hands/cradling..." but it makes it sound like the baby ...

Hey silentpages! What an excellent short story! At one point in the middle, I was really anxious... I was afraid that the king would have his way and it would ...

Hey ladyworkz! This poem is as confusing as whatever you are talking about! I mean, I know that you are talking about some sort of conflict, but I can't really ...

Hey defend! One thing I noticed with this was the lack of chorus... and obviously I'm looking at this without knowing the music or how it would be played or ...

Hey Kea! Sorry for not critiquing this sooner! :D So, I was reading this and thinking, "Hmmmmmmm." Because this really reminds me of what I did with my novel, at ...

Hey VioletJune! I'm not sure if I would call this a story... it kind of reminds me of a monologue, like in a play or something! Like, a character just ...

Hey Tale! :D I didn't read your note at first and I was thinking, "Wow, these would be great lyrics, if they were in a country song!" And then I ...

"Other" doesn't count for critiques! :'(

"I hope you die." "I'll prepare for your funeral. Do you think these earrings will look good?" "I wish you killed yourself when you had the chance."

Hey Pencil! :D That's awesome! I haven't read a good ghost story in a while, so I'm glad you posted this! Though, you should probably fix the title. You got ...

Eight minutes!!!!!!!!!

Hey UV! :D Nice picture! She looks rather normal, which is pretty amazing! And Jungle's right... her bangs do look good and her eyes are very pretty. Now, what you ...

One more hour! :o

Hey Eli! This is a good start, but it is by no means a final draft! The next question you should ask yourself is WHY is this particular image important? ...