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Wheeeee! I read (and critiqued!) one of your stories already! So woot! Hm. So, we should avoid making you queen, eh? *Discretely takes down, "silent pages for Empress of the ...

OMG, AMAZING! I WANT TO READ MORE! Nah, just kidding! Welcome to YWS! I think I critiqued something of yours, but um... it was almost two o'clock in the morning ...

Noooooo! Not the evil unicorns! Welcome! And! I thought it was a known fact that Canadians rode on MOOSE (Meese? Mooses?) and not polar bears. :P

For calling in last radio show!

Hahaha, very clever, FlyerS! I don't think it quite works as poetry (it's a bit awkward and stilted, really), so it's definitely not the greatest poem out there, but I ...

Hey Kook! It's not everyday that you find a musical on YWS! :D So! 1. Make the lyrics longer! This is obviously a musical, so you want to make the ...

Hey BlanchKe! :D This piece is very weird! I really like the prologue... the narrator is kind of in your face about the whole death thing and the fact that ...

Hey Jarred! I know this probably isn't fun to write, but I'm curious about Aeron's and Maddie's relationship! What's going on there? You don't have to be totally explicit, but ...

Hey Jarred! When you posted Chapters 5 and 6, you put chapter 7 there as well! So there is a repeat chapter here! :) Now, the funeral! It seems unlikely ...

Hey mixed! :D So! Your first verse was all about moving on and then you started talking about the past, so it seemed like you weren't talking about moving on ...

Hey EA! I'm coming back for more! :D I want more insanity! You teased us in the first chapter with the threat of zombies and this kind of seemed random, ...

Oh man.... this was awesome! I love how humorous it is and everything. The intro made me laugh (now THAT'S how you do a prologue!) and the story was just ...

Hey Jarred! First of all, I wanted to point out that you have two chapter sixes in this post! It's a bit weird, so you might want to edit that ...

Hello again! This might just be me being crazy, but there are some parts of this story that really remind me of Eragon, such as him being able to communicate ...

Hey Jarred! Oy, yes, the writing does seem to be a little young! But when you get ready for publication, I hope you'll revise these chapters. They seem very quick! ...