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Haha, yes. Especially after studies! Basically, I just critique until I get into the mood. It helps me. :)

Hey kitro! :D One thing I think you can do is to talk about what pain... or at least give us a hint of what sort of pain you are ...

Hahaha... that flying pig looks sooooo confused, lol. But... you should add a gryphon. Just because Grif and I are twins and... well... we kind of have a psychic mindlink ...

Completely under wraps :) most of the government doesn't even know they exist; only the scientists workin on the project and the top dogs Kind of like the Manhattan Project! ...

This is fanfiction! If you want to publish this, you'll need to talk with those who own this franchise. Otherwise, as long as you don't write for any profit, you'll ...

Hey Mary! The repetition makes this rather humorous! I'm not sure if that's meant to be the case or not, but it made me giggle a bit. There's just one ...

Business theory classes ARE the worst, lol! But yeah, math can be a little difficult. Still, what got me in was the biology... still! Radiology? How's that? :D

Woooooo! This is much better! Loooooove the cliffhanger at the end! Now it's like, "What the hecks happening?!" Much, much better! The only nitpick here is Roxy... I want to ...

YES. OWL POST. Nah, just kidding. :D Here, my biotechnology professor was horrifically vague. He said something about a microarray technology, but I could not, for the life of me, ...

I think your eyes have to be open to read. Unless, of course, you're listening to a book on tape! But yeah. Otherwise, I would have learned a lot more ...

Haha, that's true! Another thing you can do... when she's not scared shitless (like... you know... when Hero kind of attacks her) she can be thinking, "What if I don't ...

Okay! This is going to be a quick nit-picky thing, but this is set in the future, and quite honestly, e-mail is not going to be the means of communication ...

Hahaha, at first I thought this was going to turn into a ghost story... but this is even better! I love Hero, lol. He's awesome. Of course, Leander's kind of ...

Hahaha, my dad is in love with trance. I have a sci fi too! It doesn't have any robots or aliens in it... just weird biotechnology gone wrong. I think ...

Hi Steph! Those sound like excellent majors. :D I'm a biochemical engineering major myself, so who knows! Maybe we'll be working with each other someday. :) Nice to see you ...