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Hey originalhobbit! First of all, you might want to check for typos again... there's one in the first line which is a bit glaring. ;) Now! For your poem! One ...

A delicious irony, if I'd ever heard one! :D Welcome to YWS! I'm following you now (woo, stalkers!) so I'll be able to see what you post, as far as ...

Impossible! I've already been claimed! :o

That sounds like a fascinating story! :D I think you'll find yourself very happy here. You'll be thankful to find that you're not the only one with ADHD or autism ...

TOTAL LOVE. I used to watch this all the time... it was awesome!

I just wanted someone to bring me a pizza and an iced that so wrong? D; Iced tea doesn't go with pizza, so YES. IT'S WRONG. Also, I claim austenite. ...

The fanfic is actually based on something that Teague wrote, a story called Fragile Little Things. You can actually read the first chapter here, though you should note that it's ...

Vonnegut is awesome! And I love sci fi. Also, I think I am in love with Wacom Intuos 4 Bluetooth tablet. That is, I haven't bought it yet, but I ...

Hey Lilicia! :D I like the idea! I would like a little more depth though... a lot of things can happen in a minute! :o One way which you can ...

Hahahaha.... I kind of adore Chloe and her maniac nature. XD I think you could possibly make this better by describing Chloe and your narrator a bit better in the ...

Dun dun dunnnnn! Just a comment... he would totally smell the smell of rotting flesh before he spotted the person. I don't know if you've ever smelled something rot before? ...

Woo! First poem! :D Right now, it looks like you keep on repeating the same thing over again... the real me vs. the perceived me. An interesting idea... but I ...

That sheep must be the leader. XD I might be mistaken, but don't sheep use their hooves when attacking? So maybe you can add that IF that even happens. If ...

Okay! So I noticed you had posted your second chapter, so I figured I would comment on this and then the second chapter, lol. I don't like the dream sequence. ...

Hey AutumnSun! :D Just one short comment! Basically, I think this poem can be broken up into two parts -- the part where they are in love and the part ...