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Re: prokaryotes
Hey Kylan! I don't think this really belongs in second person, mostly because it seems very specific, as if you're talking about an elderly woman. Not everyone will feel this ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Important Changes! Pay to Post! [Must Read]
Rosey, the max number of points you can earn per review is 50. Alright, I could have sworn it got increased awhile back. But fifty's still plenty. :) Sorry about ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The tale of two stones
You still need to finish it. ;) *prods*
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Lemonade for Breakfast (children's storybook)
Typos! On hot, hot summer mornings, when the sun was so bright it could melt a popsicle down it’s stick and onto my already messy hands, I was allowed lemonade ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Smokin' on Sesame Street (Part 2)
Psh, there wouldn't be a crowd if the school were dying. :P It looks like Zoe is going to be perpetually in the friend zone at this rate. She really ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Smokin' on Sesame Street (Part 1)
Hahaha... ooooooh dear. XD Anyway, just so you know, you don't have to censor your literary work! That is, we don't want you cussing in the regular forums, but you ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The Scions of Might
Hmm... I think this belongs less in Fantasy and more in Writer's Corner. Moved! :D
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The tale of two stones
Teehee, you need to finish this fable, my dear Rocksmith! I would probably get rid of the introduction and dive right into the story! Unless, of course, you want to ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Chapter 1
Hey Alex! :D I feel sorry for Michelle! She's waaaaay too focused on looks. I mean, at a time where she should probably be worried about giving the speech, she's ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Countdown
Hey Gryphon! There is something magical about space exploration indeed! Anyway, I think, in this case, this was much too gimmicky for me to like it. I didn't like how ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Important Changes! Pay to Post! [Must Read]
It was 500 points per storybook, right? I'm not opposed to it, and it'd only take five minutes to make the change. What do others think? Yay, do it!
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: alternate beginnings
Hey Adeera! I'm guessing that you want us to tell you which one we liked and why, so that's what I am going to do! :D First off, I liked ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: My Heart Pumps Diesel
Hey Sunny! Welcome to YWS! :D First off, a typo! I could barely use a computer, let alone identify it's parts. The word "it's" should be "its". Also, I'm a ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: The World According To YWS [Updated With USA & UK Maps]
I can see my house from here! :o
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Plug/Find YWS Pages
I made a bunch of pages! Mad Men: Pigs: Craig Ferguson: Clarinets: FREAK: The Beatles: James Bond: Burn Notice: Backstreet Boys: Spun Yarn:
Jul 18, 2010
