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Hey emalily! I kind of like this! :D I can see it sung in a kind of country rock song by a female singer with powerful chops, which makes me ...

Hey Atticus! The repetition kind of bugs me. Like, for t he most part, it looks like you copied and pasted most of it for the last part, with minor ...

PSH. Zoe is such an idiot for not going with the obvious choice... which is Big Bird. Elmo is such a whiny little pot head. He thinks that Bert is ...

Hey Wariofart! This kind of reminded me of 2ge+her! If you haven't heard their music, check them out. They were a boy band when boy bands were cool... and they ...

Hey blackbird! Nice poem, overall! I liked the way that you drew this up. The one thing that I think might make this better is if you went more in ...

Hahaha, this is funny! I loved the first one, thought the third one was the gross, and kind of had a love/hate relationship with the second one. I love it ...

Hey Thane! :D I think I would be more interested in seeing you talk more of what your sick and twisted dreams are. You kind of go into it, with ...

Hey Kyllorac! Mark Twain once said this, "The difference between the almost right word & the right word is really a large matter--it's the difference between the lightning bug and ...

Hey jolene! :D First of all, I don't think this is a prologue! A prologue is more like a chapter. What I think you want to know is if this ...

Hey Illa! :D First of all, I wouldn't call this historical fiction, lol. Mostly because one of my friends is pretty much an expert on pirates and... well... this isn't ...

Hey cpopkin! I think you're getting some terms mixed up! A prologue is basically a chapter that doesn't seem to go with the rest of the story which is put ...

Hey sargsauce! :D The way your stanzas move kind of bug me. Like, right now all of them seem like sighs. Like, they start off sharply and then they are ...

Eek! I adore Pokemon. Though I stopped watching the episodes after 151 Pokemon... I suck, I know. :P Anyway, by episodic, do you mean a bunch of short stories relating ...

Hey Lee! One thing I was really hoping to see in this HP fanfiction, especially since it's set 19 years later, was a deeper look in their characters, possibly through ...

Just a quick note... I don't know what the rest of the play is about (sorry!) but looking over this epilogue... it seems very short! That is, if this weren't ...