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Hey Sachi! The death scene sounds really strange and random right now. I don't think I really like it. I think you should either expand or get rid of it. ...

Haha, I kind of adore the description of the character with the scar crinkling when he smiles. That's awesome. It's not so much as the description that I adore, it's ...

I love this story so much. XD Also! It looked really fun to edit. Really fun. So I edited, using Track Changes, of course. What I did, mainly was reformat ...

I always look at tip 101 and wonder if Nate wrote that because of me, aside from the getting-away-with-it part. xD He totally did. ;)

Dude, your title rocks so hard that it's amazing. Anyway, for the first five stanzas, I thought it sounded too much like a cheerleader. Not that sounding like a cheerleader ...

Are you talking about the interface of the actual coding program or...?

The reason why the ending is a bit weird is because you made it go from slightly boring to extremely jarring. And the jarringness of the last line (a very ...

I know what I've been missing all my life! More of Sachi's writing! This was loverly! Very touching and wonderful. My main point against this piece is there isn't enough ...

Nathalie! Yay! We have a resident Finnish person here, but I don't recall us having a Dutch person. Anyway, welcome very much! I've heard much about the Netherlands, and it ...

Hey Aiden! This seems more like a monologue than a story. Or maybe a love letter of sorts by a spurned lover who has nothing to lose, but again not ...

Race was actually made up to classify blacks as inhuman, actually. The scientific categories were not a part of that. Just sayin'. :) They've come to mean something else.. but ...

OMG, a new poem by wisemann210?! :o So, I liked this for the most part! The first three lines are full of awesome. It's the last two lines that looked ...

Hey, smashles! :D A very catchy tune! I imagine it as a kind of poppy song. The repetition totally works for it too, which is completely awesome. One thing that ...

So! I don't know if you're still interested in this poem or not, but since I bugged you, I figured I would give you a critique. :) This was an ...