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You have to do a bit of critical thinking when you reevaluate your work, yes. Some comments you'll listen to, others you'll disregard. But thinking has never been a bad ...

Proving, once again, that California is awesome.

Now you don't know they're zombies, really. The imagery isn't really as evocative of it now, since it doesn't use the typical cliches associated with zombies. Also, the second line ...

Maybe something with a little more... gory glory? I keep on thinking of awful things, like "half-eaten leg" or something else similarly disgusting, because I'm a terrible person. XD Now ...

It was the man’s gesture that alerted Dhananad’s eye to the intent of their visit. Just before the man came in, he shook his snow off his coat, brushed the ...

Yay! Better! :D This is completely nit-picky, but I had a problem with this: Dragging their dead limbs behind, They're coming for me. Too much of the same sound! So, ...

Yeah, but we all know you're in a different dimension where time has no meaning.

*Moved to Novels section, at author's request*

Oy, calm down everyone. If someone does indeed make a completely useless comment, or make an excessively harsh comment, please contact a moderator (we're the guys in the green names). ...

Woo! ALSO! With the YWS upload thing? You can upload MULTIPLE pictures! So, don't worry about that. ^^

Sorry, I'm kind of late. ^^ Ahh! I hate it when you fall in love with your best friend. So, so, so awkward! On the plus side, sometimes they realize ...

Haha, I was going to point out that it was a senryu. XD Anyway, I don't like the use of "so." I mean, I know that you were trying to ...

Teehee, we're all our own characters. It's awesome. :) And yes, a start is a start! You're on your own road to greatness, I imagine! *moved to Welcome Mat*

Teehee! The first paragraph has so much awesomeness that it's hard to say how awesome it is. It's THIS awesome though. *flails* Anyway! :D You have this here! The town ...

You can also add a picture using the forum! Click "Reply" (not Quick Reply!) and there should be a tab right below the textbox that says "Upload attachment." Click that. ...