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Haha! I knew she was evil from the get-go! She didn't fool me, oh no she didn't! I think this is probably my favorite chapter so far, if only because ...

Wait, are you saying that Americans are considered to be happy-go-lucky people? That's pretty hilarious! I always thought we were considered assholes by other countries... probably because of our stub

*Sweenie* There were two rules for the my eyrie. 1) Don't get involved with humans. 2) If you do get involved with humans, knock them out and fly away. Let ...

Dude, don't diss the emo teenagers. We can totally make a story from that.

Very well then. I am a gryphon character... female and the fraternal twin of YOUR gryphon character you will inevitably create. We don't know we are twins though, so that's ...

I do like the idea of running into the forest and just talking and be accepted as who you are. It's a very beautiful idea. :) One thing I might ...

Griffypoo! Just one thing about your edit: In luctus pellentesque imperdiet. Aliquam arcu nisi, feugiat in interdum sed, sollicitudin in magna." I would replace the period with a double hyphen. ...

Hmmm... I think I would really like to see a bit more conflict in this. Like, they pull over waaaaaaay too easily. An American family, pull over? Psh! Maybe they ...

First of all! I have never known a forest to be brightly lit. So you may want to change that! Second of all, HOLY CRAP. That was intense! I mainly ...

Hey Forest! :D This poem reminded me of someone who is desperately worried about something, but doesn't want to say what it is, explicitly, so she just keeps on saying ...

Hey! Just a couple of things first: the ones leading the pack doesn't care!

Tangent! You told me that you had another poem, so I ran to it because I LOVE YOU. Anyway, I like Today better than this one! This one seems largely ...

Ahhh! You are such a pretty poet and I love you completely and utterly.

Hey alz! Welcome (formally!) to YWS! :D

Jabs>> It says 301 characters in Word for me. Also, I think paragraph breaks count?