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Re: Who is the Google Adsense bot writing to?
He's a nice guy kay? D': You aren't saying... D:
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Daytura in Wonderland
Hey watch! You wanted me to look at this, so here I am! :D I looked at the small bottle of pills next to me and felt an icy shiver ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Who is the Google Adsense bot writing to?
I KNEW IT.
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: HI BOTS!
They are little spiders who crawl around the web and TEAR OUT YOUR EYES.
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Life [Prologue]
Dun dun dun! I think I almost wrote a story like this a while ago. But, I was lazy and didn't want to start it. So I'm glad that the ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Hi everyone
¡Hola! I saw you in chat... and then I found your poem! So wooo! I commented on it too. I thought you were more of in the Russian area, so ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Alone in the Crowd
Hey Pigeon! :D First of all, I would totally rearrange your poem to look like this! Walking down forty-second street There are a thousand, thousand feet; All of them marching ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Heaven's Gate
Hey Patrick! :D One thing I would like to see is a little bit more... conflict, if that makes sense. You kind of have the conflict set in the middle. ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Matryoshka
Eek! Love the idea with the Matryoshka doll. :) First of all! It comes seeking it's reflection
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: The Pink Pill.
Hi Emilie! You've gotten a lot of advice so far, so I hope I'm not repeating the other comments! I haven't read the previous comments, so I probably am. Sorry ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: HI BOTS!
They're taking revenge on all the times you stalk me!
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: HI BOTS!
*waves hand* Hi bots! I see you there. Google Adsense [Bot], MSN [Bot], and Yahoo [Bot]. You guys are awesome!
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Mansfield Park rant
Okay, so I'm not finished yet, but I think I know why Fanny drives me nuts. It's the way she's perceived by people. I mean, yeah, she's terrified and she's ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Er...Hi!...?
Hi Sarah! How do you do? :) I think the best way to learn how to write is to just write and don't be afraid to suck at it. But, ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Today.
Woo! You have a nice poem! One thing that I might suggest, if you're looking to improve this poem still, is that you should switch the first stanza (you are ...
Sep 17, 2010
