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I can't find SPEW. (Ironic, no? ;))

Hi Maki! I changed the rating of this to 16+, since it had the f-word in it. ;) Now, as for your lyrics! I can see it as some sort ...

Hey Pen! Just a couple of things! Most of the time, this is a really cute romance! I love the scenery, I love how they're at the beach and just ...

I'm back! :D Okay, so now I'm on chapter 2. Lots of action here! Plus, now we actually have names! WOO! Matthias and Tristan. A good pairing to be sure! ...

Hi Jenny! :D I see that this is a romance novel! Yay! I've been kind of... addicted to those as of late, so I am really looking forward to this ...

Hi Lukan! :D Okay, so your poem! The first couple of lines are kind of weird. Like, it sounds like you're trying to use words to evoke some sort of ...

Eek! Genetics. I'll be taking my first genetics class tomorrow. :D Anyway, one thing I would really like it is if you could expand on it. Yes, yes, I think ...

Eek, sorry I am so late! I didn't see this till now. :( I'm going to make my comments general so that you can have some advice for your next ...

Hi kaiden! :D Oh my... the words "unedited" make me quake! But really, this was pretty good! I only found one typo: You see, it’s been a while since a ...

Hi BlackDahlia! :D First of all, you don't need to have the quotes... really! The neat thing about poetry is that narrations don't really need quotes. It's rather different from ...

Hi Demoness! :D One thing that I was wondering about when I read this... you said that they died for love, but I really couldn't see any love in this ...

Hello! :D For one, I really liked the uncapitalized style. If you did it any other why, I think it would look too annoying! At least for me. If it ...

The only thing I am sad about is the poetry and short story database. I spent sooooo many hours on that! But yeah, the other stuff sounds cool.

Can I add him to my friends list? XD He's a loner. :P

HE'LL CHEAT ON YOU LIKE HE CHEATED ON ME. :(