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Re: YWS Trading Cards :D
Dude! Let's do this! who is good at drawing? Or... um... trading cards, in general? The only one I know is Pokemon, lol.
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Hi
Natasha Garrett is a beautiful name! And spacey is awesome. Glad to see you around! PM me if you need any help. :)
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Review Day September 2010 Check-In
PLUS. The site was down for an hour? So we could have totally made it if it were up! :o
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: The Rose Garden
Hey SmritiBansal! :D First of all! You misspelled "their." You wrote it as "thier" instead. So make sure that you correct those spelling errors! Now, for your poem! I liked ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Poor Little Eraser Dog
Aw, this is adorable! :D One thing! I would change the poem slightly to this: Poor little eraser dog, he's missing one of his ears, a careless mistake in a ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: proffesor (a house of night fan fic)
Hi seana! :D I know you didn't want us to comment on this, but... well... the spelling can be corrected easily. So do it! ;) First of all, this is ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Secure.
Hi Becca! :D Aha! A looking-into-mirror-and-confronting-yourself poem! :D I would probably start with stanza two, actually... the first stanza isn't really important overall to the poem, so I think it
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming
Haha, I love that album, "Here Comes Science!" And then, you used that in a personalized poem invitation? Awesome! Were I your age, I would probably go out with you ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Reach For The Sky
Hey KAH! Demeter's right! It did sound more like a song than an actual poem. As a poem, it seemed much too repetitive and and rhyme-y (like that's even a ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Joy Production
Oooh, I liked this poem! It kind of reminded me of Shel Silverstein's poems... and I adore Shel Silverstein. :) It also kind of reminded me of Dr. Seuss's "The ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Why the Earth is Beautiful
Hi Lena! Nate got the spelling and grammar part, so I won't bug you about that! :D Anyway, one of the things I would love to see is you going ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Love, The Boy Above...
Awww, so cute! Anyway, one of the things that I wondered about was, this guy is obviously dead, right? And he was meaningful to the girl who is still alive. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Fire
Hey Lawson! :D So, this format kind of reminds me of the Twilight zone! You have the prologue, where that one guy is talking about the Twilight Zone, then it ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Matthew and Ali (Poem)
Hey Eli! I have to say, I have to agree with Abigail here! The poem just fell flat. It seemed like you were writing more of an opinion piece than ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Betrayl of the Lord's Wife
Hi introvert! :D Hmm... you have a very interesting poem! It kind of reminds me of the old-school romances that I so adore. :D One idea... maybe you can rewrite ...
Sep 26, 2010
