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Hmmm... interesting! So, basically, they interact with each other in their dreams? That's a pretty neat idea! One thing that I might do is describe exactly how Sophie and Emelia ...

Eek, thanks for the critique! :D This piece is really quite old though... so I think its time has come to be locked! :)

Hmmm... This poem has two major parts of it that are wholly unconnected with each other. One has to do with the learning of language and the other has to ...

So, first of all, let me bring you up to speed. The main principle of genetics is this: DNA -----> RNA -----> Proteins. So DNA is our genetic code, RNA ...

No shredding??? *puts away chainsaw dejectedly* Anyway, a huge welcome to you! What's your friend's username? :D

Guys, cool it. Absolutely no more flaming or I'll lock this.

Very Twilight-Zone of you! I like it. :) Then again, I'm kind of a sucker for science fiction, lol. Plus, it's science fiction that talks about the consequences of technology... ...

Zoya: I LOVE YOU TOO! > PFFT. That was a lovely critique! I'll have to look at your last point more critically before I make any changes, but I'll definitely ...

That's when you do a full body wax! :o Nah, I'm just kidding. I like your piece. Though, it's pretty sad! Having no heart is generally a bad thing! Although, ...

LOL. She's a disenchanted former creative writing major. XD

Hey Yuriiko! :D Basically, I think the other guys are right. It's cute, but it doesn't have any substance. I think it would be funnier if you included some more ...

I forget the exacts, but I think it's based on character-counts in your review. The more you write, the more you get...although, if we see you abusing this, we're going ...

Foxy lady! :D Hi! I think your life is plenty exciting! English literature majors have all the fun. What sorts of books are you reading now? What sorts of things ...

Jiggity does make a good point, lol... it would be a more interesting comparison between the paperback and the e-book. ;)

Thanks for all the comments! I took in a lot of your suggestions and edited it accordingly. :D Anyway, the edits! short t-shirt ---> small t-shirt Poor man ---> Poor ...