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Dante's Inferno is amazing. :) As far as your poem, it sounds a bit... plain? One of the things I would love to see is more graphic imagery. I mean, ...

I think the first two lines are strange with the rest of the poem. I don't quite like it. Either, I would try to integrate it into the poem more ...

Dude, this only makes me realize how little of a life I have. xD

I'm going to bioengineer a heart now, lol.

This is kind of boring. You don't really tell any stories or story and it's just about this guy being stupid. Of course, you could argue that that was the ...

This really wasn't organized well at all. I'm still confused by what your argument is... you tried to define what "education" is and how to improve it, so you defined ...

The metering was a bit off, but that's okay! :D Still, I like the concept. It's very cute! And, having to deal with these ten-year-old dinosaurs... well... it's very true! ...

Hey Ruby! First, do a quick grammar check and stuff! The word "breathee" is in there! Also, "May realised as she studied the garden that the rain had not only ...

Hi Thomas! So, I don't think the rambling is really problematic here. I like rambling stories. In fact, some of those rambling stories are some of the most awesome stories ...

Ack! I love this poem! Some of the rhymes are awkward, lol, but I don't care. I thought I would hate this poem, since I actually did hear voices in ...

Hi ethe! :D Okay! About this poem? You mention that the spider is going to face death for the first time! Which is cool and whatever. But then, a couple ...

Right now this short story is unfinished. It'll probably be finished tomorrow. In any case, please put down your general thoughts about the story. If you can't finish the story, ...

Oh gosh... XD Actually, alcohol just gets calmer, so that wouldn't be good for crazy stupid poems. But I think that when this was written nearly six years ago, I ...

Inbetweener>> Have you put it in the novel forum? If you put it in the short story forum, it won't work! However, you can get a mod to move it ...

Hi Val! You have a really interesting title... I am assuming it's from the adage: "One man's trash is another man's treasure"? What's it about? Also, what sorts of books ...