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Yay! It's a little too blunt! I would probably trim it just a bit. Something like... her spine bloomed from her curved back like a mountain, of Emaciation Co. with ...

Oooh! Yummy! A poem! :D First, a typo! Too something about money and greed, how very apt

Ahhh! You know the way to my heart... multi-variable ecomonics calculus class? THAT IS SO COOL. Anyway! Keep you as constant;

Hi Kiicoh! :D Okay! So this critique is going to sound extremely nitpicky, but that's only because I really like the concept of your poem. :) Now! The first thing ...

Hey fruity! :D Eek! A cutting poem. That makes me sad. :( Hopefully, you're less pissed off now! As far as the poem goes! I like using pain in poems, ...

Gah! I love this! The humor is funny, I loooooove the characters, and the drawing is pretty fantastic! Though... um... I have to admit, I kind of have a crush ...

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I like them!

Yay! Rosaries! :D They're beautiful things. :) For this, I probably would make Jesus the focal point and not the written words. Also, I am curious... what's on the other ...

Hi Warrior Princess! :D Okay, so when I saw the title, I kind of squeed because it reminds me of Stravinsky's "Rite of Spring" and I rather adore that whole ...

Okay, try this: take out the adjectives and adverbs that are not ellipses of noun phrases or proper adjectives or demonstrative adjectives. And I'm saying this because it still seems ...

I'm glad you're not depressed! :o As far as the poem goes, I think it holds a lot of potential! I mean, your character essentially watching someone die from cancer. ...

Hi Monument! I think this poem might have tried too hard as far as bombarding us with images. It looks more like a checklist than a poem because it lists ...

Ooooooooh... a work by BlueAfrica? I want! So, this one was almost realistic except for the fact that it was not nearly long enough. I don't know... little girls don't ...

Hahaha, I think you should stop talking with serious poetry if this is the sort of stuff that you come up with instead. It's quite delightful! It reminds me of ...