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  • Official Polls Re: Did you miss the official polls?

    I am the 42nd voter! I think you all know what this means...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Physics is...

    I think Physics is Fun! For me Physics=Logic=Interesting. YOUR FACE IS FUN.

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Squills - The YWS News Re: Man Stabs 4, Killing 1 for Making Fun of His Farts

    It issssss. Strange, huh?

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Chain-Link Fence

    Hmm... I think the poem is only powerful with the introductory paragraph. I think in the poem you may want to expand more on who these former quarterbacks are. Also, ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Colorful

    Oh my, these are so adorable! The girl's socks make me so happy! My main critique would probably be on the second picture... the yellow blob looks a bit strange ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Despair

    Hm... I like your other poem better! This one seems a little bit too tame and unmoving, if you know what I mean! My favorite stanza was your second to ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: When Bunnies Attack

    Anyway! I think plotbunnies are cute and cuddly. Don't they bounce around and give writers ideas for stories? That's what I thought! In any case, I think you should EMBRACE ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Rain's Dance

    Ooh, nice poem! :D A couple minor changes I think would make this really neat! It's raining again. Why do I feel so sad when it rains?

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lust

    Hi Lukan! :D This poem was pretty good and the rhymes weren't forced, which made it fabulous! They rhythm was a little off at times, so you might want to ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Code of the mistake

    Hi EternityRain! Interesting story. :) Nice characters too! A couple of thoughts! I think you shouldn't start off with talking about how she is an orphan, because clearly she is ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Rosary

    Ooh, that sounds great! Can't wait to see your new picture! :)

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Parallel

    Eek! Don't worry! Non-Euclidean geometry is a very special geometry. That doesn't mean that Euclidean geometry doesn't work though! However, Euclidean geometry holds several assumptions, like parallel

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Brand New Me!!!

    Yay for Juliann coming to stay! :D As far as your poem goes? I think it would be super neat if you could talk about her kicking butt. Right now, ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hallelujah

    Ack! Tangent (and yes, it's really you!) these are soooooo good. I love them. I love how they build off each other, I love how they are haikus but so ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Soiled Vows

    Hi Matthews! :D First of all, your title seems to have an identity crisis! Is it Soiled Vows or Broken Vows? Now, for the rest of the poem! It seems ...

    Feb 5, 2011


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