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Re: Did you miss the official polls?
I am the 42nd voter! I think you all know what this means...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Physics is...
I think Physics is Fun! For me Physics=Logic=Interesting. YOUR FACE IS FUN.
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Man Stabs 4, Killing 1 for Making Fun of His Farts
It issssss. Strange, huh?
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Chain-Link Fence
Hmm... I think the poem is only powerful with the introductory paragraph. I think in the poem you may want to expand more on who these former quarterbacks are. Also, ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Colorful
Oh my, these are so adorable! The girl's socks make me so happy! My main critique would probably be on the second picture... the yellow blob looks a bit strange ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Despair
Hm... I like your other poem better! This one seems a little bit too tame and unmoving, if you know what I mean! My favorite stanza was your second to ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: When Bunnies Attack
Anyway! I think plotbunnies are cute and cuddly. Don't they bounce around and give writers ideas for stories? That's what I thought! In any case, I think you should EMBRACE ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The Rain's Dance
Ooh, nice poem! :D A couple minor changes I think would make this really neat! It's raining again. Why do I feel so sad when it rains?
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Lust
Hi Lukan! :D This poem was pretty good and the rhymes weren't forced, which made it fabulous! They rhythm was a little off at times, so you might want to ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Code of the mistake
Hi EternityRain! Interesting story. :) Nice characters too! A couple of thoughts! I think you shouldn't start off with talking about how she is an orphan, because clearly she is ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Rosary
Ooh, that sounds great! Can't wait to see your new picture! :)
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Parallel
Eek! Don't worry! Non-Euclidean geometry is a very special geometry. That doesn't mean that Euclidean geometry doesn't work though! However, Euclidean geometry holds several assumptions, like parallel
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Brand New Me!!!
Yay for Juliann coming to stay! :D As far as your poem goes? I think it would be super neat if you could talk about her kicking butt. Right now, ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Hallelujah
Ack! Tangent (and yes, it's really you!) these are soooooo good. I love them. I love how they build off each other, I love how they are haikus but so ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Soiled Vows
Hi Matthews! :D First of all, your title seems to have an identity crisis! Is it Soiled Vows or Broken Vows? Now, for the rest of the poem! It seems ...
Feb 5, 2011
