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Just a quick note! Don't worry too much about putting it in manuscript format. Nowadays, publishers like it when you use the automatic formatting that Word has. The days when ...

Oooh, I do like this! I would like to see it a bit longer, but only because it's rather fantastic! I love your word choice and your imagery. The rhyming ...

It looks like an excellent introduction! The last line does stick out a bit and sounds a bit cheesy, however that's only because the build up is so good so ...

These are fantastic! Though I have to admit, I like your colored shots better. The black and white one is a bit too dull. The colored ones have the right ...

It varies depending on your word count! The longer your story is, the less people will comment, generally. For this forum, you should only ask about three people to review. ...

Carbon dioxide rises from the flickerings of a dying flame

Pat Buchanan! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! I LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!!! DON'T LEAVE ME!

NO. The use of Mozart's Clarinet Concerto automatically makes the music 10/10. Maybe 11/10. I'm sorry, we must agree to disagree in this particular point. And yeah. This was an ...

Personally, I think ideas in general are dangerous and thus bad. Especially the biggest ones, as is the case for religion, but also the case for the patriotism, politics, conspiracy ...

Yay! Any writing which is more full of awesomeness than previously is awesome! :o

This is fantastic!

Uh oh, Goth guy ain't happy! What's his name anyway?

Woo! Going kind of Simon and Garfunkel there, aren't you? Reminiscent of "The Boxer"! :) Anyway, I think this would be a lot spiffier in the Lyrics forum, since you ...

You can't see Jesus at all in that picture! :o I demand a picture with Jesus! :D

Hey Kafka! First of all, I don't really like the second person here. Next of all, you have so many destructive images together here that it's almost a hodgepodge of ...