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Hey Tangent! Did I mention that you were awesome? Because you are! Now, for your poem, I kind of adored the "My sister hasn’t spoken to me" stanza because it ...

Hey Smiley! So I guess I was a bit vague in my first critique! Here's a video critique, which I am hoping is a lot more thorough than the previous ...

Hey Smiley! :D Lovely poem! I like the positive aspects to it and everything... mommies deserve tons of love! :) One thing that you might consider doing is cleaning up ...

Hey Jennya! Thanks for commenting on my poem. :D And thanks for explaining some of the Australian lingo! I wouldn't have known it otherwise, being in America and all. For ...

Sci fi! It got me to where I am now, doing awesome science things! :D

Didn't you hear? That little girl that you knew who would nuzzle her head into your neck and give you little butterfly kisses along your cheeks? That girl who painted ...

Hey Mikko! :D It seems more like a summary of what you want to write instead of a story. I would keep this as a summary of what you're going ...

Hey disco! :D Okay, so the typos are absolutely killlllling your poem. So you need to take them out! And you also love to use pronouns, but you don't introduce ...

Pfft! I hope it's not a novel! I do have to judge the bad writing. xD So the madness begins! :D And it's Einstein! Einstein! *twitches*

Hey Blink, you didn't answer the next question... what is your definition of human? Because one can and one has argued that civilization has only really occurred when humans can ...

Stella! And... Stella writing?! OMNOMNOM. Anyway! I'm not sure if this is me misreading things due to sleep deprivation or whatever, but... are these people she's seeing not real? Because ...

I miss Grandma Rose too. :( One request... can you tell us more stories about what she did with you, personally? I don't know... I love these sorts of bittersweet ...

When my characters swear, I usually have it go, "He swore and punched the nearest wall." Or something like that. If it's important, I'll let them swear. If it's ridiculous, ...

Blink, Quite the opposite; society preceded organised religion, which naturally came to absorb the best of society’s moral codes. What makes religion such a problem is, as I’ve said many ...

Hi Ani! Welcome to YWS! If you need any help, you can always bug me and I'll do my best to help you. :) What sort of things do you ...