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Re: We're all just so blind.
Hi madeofglass! Welcome to YWS. :) There are a couple of typos in there, so really make sure you proofread before you post! As far as the content goes, the ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: No. 3
Your message is kind of blah, or at least to me. I've always considered poetry to be a bit of a revolution, so it's not enough (for me!) to just ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: "F" = Failure
Hey Jessa! I kind of hope this wasn't a real life experience! :o I hate failing tests! Anyway, a quick grammatical edit: These troubled times, no ones’ to blame,
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Introducing Pro Accounts
Oh, just a thing! My sister, Sgt. Salt donated to the site, enough for a bumper sticker. She's not up there! :o
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Introducing Pro Accounts
They're so pretty! Thanks so much, Nate! :D
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Answers to Questions Everyone Has
Hello.! I would like to know how to delete my account (if possible). We can't actually delete your account. We can ban you from YWS, with your permission, of course, ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Heavens Mutant Children
Hey guys! Hate to be the bringer of bad news here, but for this forum, we would like to see (as the highest rating) 16+. Nothing 18+ or allowed. So ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Coward
Hi Amanda! :D Short and simple... I like! For the last part, this part is just begging to be put into a different stanza: I was so proud when he ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Oinkies! :D
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
In Corrupt a Wish, the idea is to corrupt someone's wish. Someone wishes and the next person corrupts it. Ex. 1.) I wish I had a million dollars 2.) Granted ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Woo! This hit 100 pages! :D And, like a phoenix bursting into flames and becoming a new phoenix, so this must be! Check out the new thread:
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: lovenotes
Hades' wife! You have a lovely poem here. :) I think the best part are the last two stanzas -- especially the last! But the second to last stanza kind ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: My Heaven, My Sun
This is kind of creepy, lol. I mean, if someone tried to do this to me, he would probably be slapped! I think it would be much better if we ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: A Bit About Me :)
Oooooh. I thought you had trouble with the actual posting of it. :D Well, if it feels really forced, you should totally post it up for critique! You might get ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: A Bit About Me :)
Hm... I'm not sure if I can join that partner poem thing! I'm a moderator for YWS, so there might be a conflict of interest there. I'll go check, okay? ...
Mar 8, 2011
