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Erin I was about to tell the kick ass specialist to go away, when Mr. Llama decided he wanted to go eat grass... in the opposite direction of where I ...

Erin “He’s staring at me.” “No he’s not. You’re imagining things.” But, the thing is, the llama was staring at me. More particularly, he was glaring at me, as if ...

Hi, this is the awkward first post with the rules and everything! You can join the story by inserting yourself into the story. If you don't know how to do ...

Haha, this poem is awesome! Not sure why a tortoise would help a rabbit, but whatever! Anyway, I want to know who exactly is taunting the rabbit. You said rebels, ...

Wooooo! I'm first! :D Okay! So, since I have the feeling that this is a first draft, I am NOT going to slaughter it ruthlessly and make you not want ...

Eek, this does need help! I think a lot of trimming might be really healthy for this. we like to wish for impossible things together--

This is so cool! Thanks, Nate! :D

way. You didn't do that. You didn't do that. *reads again* :( Okay! Quick word lesson! :) apart = indicates a kind of split or separation. To be apart of ...

Ooooooh. Paul's "Trip." I get it! For a second, I thought he actually went to Saturn! But, really, wouldn't they kind of need proof that he actually did go to ...

Tangent! I love you! :) I really liked this poem, though I had to stare at it for a bit for it to make sense to me. What can I ...

Yay! This is definitely a lot better. :) One thing you might think about doing you might try not using the title in the poem. Not to say that using ...

Okay, so I have to wonder... why is your poem shaped like a madlib? Or are those they supposed to be something else? In any case, right now it looks ...

You mean that you wrote, not read! :D I don't actually get what you have to say. Lies can spread and jelly can spread, but eagles can spread their wings ...

This is the second installment! Again, generally general comments are preferred. Also, if you find any typos, feel free to point them out. Also, for those who read the first ...

First of all, thank you so much! :D I did a couple of edits... 1. Granidid = Granid now. So! More like a rock. :) 2. Mentioned a little bit ...