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Re: Alezrani chapter 1
Hey Fishster! I had to read this from the beginning. :) The coffee shop, Esnatzen, was empty when Seres walked in; the moss green carpet, filled with static, shocked his ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Saving Her Soul Ch.1
I saw that this had to do with Kari-Rose and... well... I am Karina Rose, so I figured I would stop by and give this a good review! Anyway, I ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter one)
Hello! First of all, you have a highly catchy first line here! It's very catchy in fact, so I was pretty excited about reading your story. And that's a really ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Drive On, She Says
Hey Angela! First of all, a couple of nitpicky things. At eight o’clock she leaves the gym (still looking like she just stepped off the red carpet) for the bookstore. ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (4)
Dear Diary, The Black Swan is staying outside in the main plaza. In the day, he sleeps there and at night he roams around. Today, he flew away and I ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
You can post the first half here!
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: What makes you pick up a book?
I picked "Classic" because they're generally free on the Kindle and I am a cheapo and too lazy to go to the library. XD
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (3)
Dear Diary, I said that I wouldn’t write again till we were in the city, but Eurodities says that I can write as long as I get enough sleep. Eurodities ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: How to escape with a fleeing llama -- the survival guide
Cam>> Fergus's a gryphon now! Be sure to be more specific next time... you don't have the benefit of a profile. :) You can create another character, if you really ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Always the same.
Aww, this poem makes me sad! It's so true too. I kind of wish at the end that he would promise to be there, but sometimes those sorts of people ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Betrayal
Yay! I adore violent poems, so I am glad to see you writing like this. :) My main advice here would make it a lot more violent. Obviously, you have ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Girl From Daphnis-- Ch.2
Haha, Stella's kind of an overdramatic idiot at times. XD But Luca is awesome in a rebellious sort of way! Though I imagine that he's going to laugh at Stella ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Just a few :3
Duggie! :D I agree! You are too talented... see if you can get some plain white paper for your drawing notebook! It'll be much better, honest. :) I love the ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Minders
I looked it over and I realized I only found one in past tense. Yay for over-reacting! It's here: “My poem, I could not think of a word that rhymed ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Religion causes more problems than it solves
Navita reminded me of something else! Recent studies in positive psychology by Dr. Robert Emmons (done in UC Davis!) have indicated that feeling grateful (for people and things and circumstances, ...
Mar 25, 2011
