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Re: Saving Grace
Ack, I kind of love this! I love Nate and Grace's relationship with him. Like, I really, really adore them together. I kind of wonder how they didn't work out ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Exposed Chapter 2
Hmmm... not sure if I like this shift. It doesn't sound quite right. I mean, you already mention that Lina has eating disorders, which implies that she looks sick, so ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Exposed Chapter 1
Just a few general comments! I kind of adore Lya. She is very perceptive about what her big sister is doing (d'awww) and very cute. Lina is kind of sad. ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: REMOVED
Hi! I edited your post so that it was in "story" mode instead of "normal" mode. That way, now you have paragraphs! So, hopefully you'll get more reviews other than, ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Ooers. This kind of reminds me of the movie, Pleasantville, which is an awesome movie and I very much recommend it. It also has hints to The Giver. My main ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: The ArchMage Saga: Prologue Origins
Hey Matthew! :D I was reading through this chapter... wow! There is a lot of information here! I mean, consider the following paragraph: The College of Engineering had four branches; ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)
So when Snoink gets to the limit again, for the next set of starts, I vote that you should need more than 100 reviews to level up. 200-500 would be ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: April 14: Poem in your pocket day!
Today (April 14) is Poem in your pocket day! Anyway, what poem will you be carrying in your pocket to share with random strangers? :D Or, if it's not April ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Newbie Question
Have you just posted it just recently? The longer the poem has been posted, the more views it gets! So, if you've posted it recently, then it might not have ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (6)
Dear Diary, I’m sorry that I haven’t been writing. I haven’t been feeling well. Daddy’s been taking care of me, but he’s gone now. He says he’s looking for work. ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)
Holy crap. So, I've done almost 700 in a year? O_o
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Just Fishing
Haha! Cute ending!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Firearris vs. Griffinkeeper
I think Grif wouldn't have minded 2501 words, actually. In any case, I think this is worthy to have a REMATCH.
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: So You Sailed Away
Hi Solv! So I have to say... I am wondering what sort of relationship they had. It sounds like the girl really didn't care, but the guy possibly had feelings ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Firearris vs. Griffinkeeper
Actually, I have one question. Does your word counter disclude words that aren't in its dictionary? Nah. He's using Microsoft Word, and that counts all the words, regardless of spelling.
Apr 6, 2011
