Snoink

There are toooooons of people from India here, so yay for that! :D Your story sounds really interesting! Is it following the account that is fake or the person behind ...

Or, we'll watch out for you! :D My advice is write what you love! I kind of adore writing those weird, quirky stories, so I do that and I looooove ...

The plot thickens! :o Okay, so first of all! I think the very last part of this chapter should be Alec and Ridley's conversation, just because the flow seems a ...

Aw, if it makes you feel better, I can't write good music for beans either! Still, you seem to be quite musically inclined. :) Ooers, you know Kylan! This is ...

Ooers, actually I liked this quite a lot! The nameless one is strange and seems like a monster...I've been reading a lot of Greek myths, so I was reminded by ...

Okay, so I said that I would look at this later, but... well... I lied. :P Anyway! So, just general nitpicks! I think something should happen in between the part ...

Hi Dreamwalker! I kind of feel like the next chapter would be a better start of the story. The first few paragraphs were rambling at best. When she said, "But, ...

Hello again! :D I forgot to say this in my last critique, but I suppose I'll say it here! I really do like your writing style. It's very nice and ...

Hi Alex! Interesting set up you have here! I think it's interesting that he can take away souls and remain unseen. At first, I thought it was because he was ...

Wow! These are lovely. I love all the little details and I especially love all the little inventions that you have. It kind of reminds me of a murderous version ...

Nate is right, about the inaccuracies of the "topic viewed" number! To provide a humorous example, just recently, I submitted a work and refreshed it about a dozen times, just ...

Bumped for WORLD RELEVANCE.

IT'S BECAUSE YOU ARE DEALING WITH OTHER AWESOME THINGS.

Dear Diary, Lin is very mad at me. I asked her to help me practice measuring, but when I told her what to do, she was really mad and she ...

Wow, Snoink. You don't hold back, do you? Eek, not really. I should probably warn you now that there are some really squeamish parts coming up eventually. Not immediately , ...