-
Re: Be Quick.
Hello housecat! :D Hmm... you're right! It does feel like there's something missing. I think it's because it's jerky and it doesn't really completely what it wants to say in ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
OH NOES. *flails* First of all, I liked this chapter sooooo much better. It was like, "OH NO. THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!" Which is a good thing to feel in ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
Hey Micki! :D First of all, a couple of typos! “You'll loose braincells if you keep thinking about those things.”
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm visiting you mom...
Aw, this is so sad! :( All right, so I don't know if this is based off of a true story or whatever (I hope it isn't!) but I'll pretend ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 1 (OUTDATED)
I am not looking forward to finishing this novel. It is so good! :D Just a couple of things! I'm not going to do an overall thing again, because the ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps (draft)
Hey Rosey! :D Okay, you're going to hate me for saying this, but I actually think you went too fast for this! While it's neat to be dumped in the ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread
The numbers are the amounts of points earned by each team!
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch (1)
Hey Pink! Just a few nitpicking things first, and then we'll start getting into the meatier parts! “Let me get that for you,” Her father offered, taking hold of her ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch
Hello, my favorite leader! :D Crosse raised his head while watching a child trip and land in a puddle. His mother lifted him up and around her waist then jogged ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 1 (OUTDATED)
Hey ultraviolet! I found one huge error in this piece that rather bothered me: This is the first draft of my new novel The Deserter. I know it's not that ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Spare~1 (Edited)
Ooers! You have a very clean style of writing! I like it very much. :) In the Prologue, I think it would be best to mention the sons' names! That ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Letter to the World
Hey Kim! :D All right! Now, I'm not against the subject at all because hatred is never good! So, poems that ask for less hatred are awesome. With that said, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread
Oh, darn it! I thought it was going to happen in less than twenty minutes. GAHHHH. THE WAIT IS KILLING ME.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Review Teams!
It's not too late to join the fun! :D
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Spectacular
LESS THAN THREE HOURS. Or,
Apr 30, 2011
