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Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 2 (OUTDATED)
Hi ultraviolet! Sorry I took so long, things got busy on my end! But, I have to admit I'm a bit disappointed that you haven't posted more yet. XD So! ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: April 2011 Statistics
#1 California RULES! (Thanks for the cool bragging rights, Nate.) Snoink, you better come join me in this. :D Also, go Firefox. ^-^ She's right, y'know?
May 4, 2011 -
Re: May Day Review Day Review
Haha, you know you're on YWS when a review on site activity becomes a grammar commentary! XD
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Hey guys
The very fact that you like hagis is amazing! Also, how do you express your emoness? It seems like the emo culture varies from region by region. :)
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread
Wow! I can't believe we did 1000 reviews. Our standards are going to be insanely high from now on. Is that a good thing or a bad thing? I still ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread
Woo! Outstanding success, guys! :D Nate! I can't wait till you release the statistics! :)
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Lifewish: Prologue
Ballet! :D I've never done it, but I love stories with ballet. Anyway, the main thing about this piece that I noticed was the dialogue grammar. You definitely need to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Tower Girls- 2.1
I told you I would review this! :D First, a typo! Later, I would be driven made by the call used by suitors (though at the same time it was ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Tower Girls- 1
STELLA. You should have told me that you edited this! But that's okay because Firestarter's review on the next piece made me remember this piece and I was able to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 1 (OUTDATED)
Ultraviolet! D: I agree with borntobeawriter here... I would really like to have seen a meeting with her and Gavin better. Or maybe a dream. Not a flashback. Not that ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)
Yay! I'm back for more! :D I've never read The Hunger Games (I know, I am a horrible person, etc., etc.) so I can't help you with that, unfortunately! :( ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (9)
Haha, don't worry! I'll add more soon! :D He did have a stroke! But I think I was trying to avoid medical terminology here to maintain a more fantastic feel, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
I want to be a dinosaur! ...just kidding. PIG.
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread
Don't wish to be a bummer or anything, but might competitive reviewing make the criticism less clinical? If it's being rushed or forced etc ??? Just a thought! BetaTested If ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: cinnamon excuses for false urgencies
Hello! I'll be just reviewing one poem (the first!) because it was interesting and such and I kind of adored it. Plus, I really want to go deep into it, ...
May 1, 2011
