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Re: Parallel chapter 1
Okay, this is going to sound reeeeeeeeeeeeally nitpicky, but I am kind of a science nerd, so... well... yeah. :P The idea of a world having no gravity is rather ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Why Didn't You Listen?
Hey snickerdooly! :D So, this poem is a bit long, and I think you can really trim it down into something and make it a lot stronger as a result. ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: We can, we can do this! (edited)
Haha, oh dear. How are you supposed to critique something like this? This is very, very, very dorky. And I kind of adore it for that! Just one thing: Buddy ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Info-dumping
I really, really like what you do, Dynamo! :D For me, I tend to not give enough information about the story, especially in the beginning? It's not necessarily a good ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Unfinished stories.
What helps me is I focus on stories that I really, really love. If I don't really love to write it, I put it on the shelf and wait a ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Satire.
I adore satire! :D I approve of Kyllorac's pick of Saki! I love that storyteller! Mark Twain is always excellent for that sort of stuff. His biblical satire had me ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Is this description plausible?
Hmm... I'm not so sure. The description is fine upon first glance, but if you stop to think about it, it's a bit confusing. I'm a little confused as to ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Let me introduce myself...
Dia duit, Shamrock! I hope YWS is good for you. :) What sorts of things do you like writing?
May 17, 2011 -
Re: hi..
Ooers, those are three of my favorite activities that you listed! :D What else do you like to do? Are you a fan of hiking? Are you a dog or ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Fresh meat!
Uh oh, one of those flaky writers... we're going to have to beat some discipline in you, aren't we? :D It's great to have you on, Quasi! And, now that ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Noob
Psh! I'm sure there are tons of exciting things about you! In any case, I did read it all. ;) But that's okay! You seem a little weird, so you'll ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Grrr. Be afraid.
Ooers, the people in orange are inactive moderators! So don't contact them, lol. ALSO. The age thing is a long story... you see, we had some redwood trees that wanted ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: ^^"
(Have I mentioned that I love you lately? Because I do!
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Um... one of my stories is between 12+ and 16+... So I don't know what to rate it as. It's super long but uses both of the "B words" in ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Hello!
Ooers! You seem to love twisting stories around and asking questions about everything. Critical thinking... I like it. Do you do spin-offs of fairy tales, or is that just something ...
May 17, 2011
