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Re: Swan Song (11)
Lomones flipped through the rest of the book. “There’s nothing more written.” “So you finished?” “I suppose. But it ends on a strange note.” He sighed and leaned back, rubbing ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (1)
I totally thought of the Mussorgsky song too! And, it is an awesome song. But you knew this. I looove this piece! I love the whole house with the chicken ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (2)
Okay! So, I don't get it! Why did he keep the porcelain dish if he didn't actually steal it? Also, it sounds like he's really, really guilty, so when he ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: A newbie's introduction
Yup, you can definitely add chapters as you wish! Welcome to YWS! I know that I just like to write for fun... nothing serious... so you definitely don't have to ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Gerard Butler or Chris Hemsworth?
Pat Buchanan, clearly.
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi?
Dude! You should definitely do some freewrites and just write whatever comes to your head and such. You'll get a better sense of your writing then. :) Welcome to YWS! ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: When I should be revising..
You should come to California! :D That's where I am, actually. I'm in a really good place too... I'm an hour and a half away from San Francisco, the mountains, ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: How could you tell I was new?!
Des! It's good great stupendous to see you on here! Did you know that Ringo (from the Beatles) thought that he had made up this one song which he was ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
Moe, the people who "choose" are illegitimate. Just sayin'. That's not necessarily true. I know some people who have had traumatic experiences with the opposite sex who turn to their ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (10)
The POV will probably change either 12 or 13. Maybe 14. I am not sure yet. Yay for no outlines! But, it's definitely coming up fast. And it will be ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (10)
Dear Diary, Today was a very bad day for Daddy. Lin was going to go to her flower shop, but Daddy wasn’t feeling well and he kept saying things that ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (2)
Hahaha! Good question. He probably wrote her something mean because Daddy made him and he didn't want to so he was as awful as possible. He's not really a nice ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Spring
Do you haiku?! Nah, just kidding, obviously you have! :D Okay, so the thing is that you only have a limited amount of syllables in a haiku to pack the ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Honor's Gauntlet (1.2)
DUDE. I lost a shoe the other week... sill can't find it. It's pretty awkward. It's a little black flat and I only lost one of them. In any case, ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Calligraphy
Hi Tangent! :D I love you and your work always, so yay! I love the word play, especially the part where she says she forgets the whether that person is ...
May 22, 2011