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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Alone

    Hi Vapor! Well, my first suggestion is to use a spell check. ;) You misspelled "briefly"! :o Hm, so this is a disease about eating disorders? Eek. I didn't see ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Myriad maze

    Hey freewritersavvy! :D Hmm... I am not sure about this! It seems very... technical? This may just be me, but when I write, the last things that come to mind ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A true writer

    Hey qaralynn! One of the things that I noticed here was... well... how flat everything is. If you want to talk about a true writer, why not talk about the ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Random

    XD Oh dear! Well, okay. This was very amusing! I'm not sure what exactly this is for, but I am 99.7% this wasn't serious and you're just trying to get ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    Well, your work will be criticized! Make no doubt about that... but it is done with lots and lots of love and we'll never criticize you. ;) And yes (about ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My Guardian Dog 2 - Rewritten!

    Rawr! I am here! :D Okay, this was definitely not as intense, so you will be happy that I will not have a heart-attack soon. Or something like that. ;) ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My Guardian Dog - Rewritten!

    Holy crap. This was super intense. I was seriously dreading getting to the end, just because my stomach was in knots, lol. Okay, first a couple of things... I suddenly ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.

    Hi Addie! It's good to see you around! I think you'll find a bunch of excellent fantasy stories here -- I was reading one today just now by silentpages that ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    Dude, no way! Having characters talk with you isn't that weird at all... one of my characters, Lin (she's from my story, Swan Song, which has tons of philosophical ramblings ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Spare~2

    Rawr! I finally am getting to this... I suck, I know. :P Okay, so I was a bit confused during this! I think there were some lines that you thought ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Tuesday [Supernatural cover of Rebecca Black]

    Ceres! :D First of all, I am glad you spent weeks and weeks perfecting this perfection of perfect perfectly serious work. Not many people strive for this level of quality, ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: (insert interesting title here)

    Hahah! This reminds me of the poems that I used to write! Yeah... I mostly do prose now? Anyway, I have to say that my favorite part about the poem ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)

    Yay! We love Nano and the opportunities it gives us, right? :D Anyway, this was fun! General impressions? Ambria is an idiot. I don't really like her at all... she ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Other Re: Why am I a Christian?

    Er, this may just be me being dumb, but what exactly is Christianese anyway? I have never heard of it before. I am not quite certain of this... this may ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stuck in a Dead F**k

    Hello! I don't mind depictions of sex or anything, even if they're graphic, but I found this really boring. Maybe that's because I was expecting something much graphic, and this ...

    May 30, 2011


I want to understand you, I study your obscure language.
— Alexander Pushkin