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Re: YWLJ Cover. :)
Jasmine! :D Okay, so this is a very colorful picture and I love the blend of colors, plus the plant-like structure there is. Plus, the fonts that you used are ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: A Rose for You, My Darling
Aw, this is adorable! The way your cat is looking at the rose is completely adorable! Plus, the details of your cat's fur, the rose... all of these lend this ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Ashes and Teeth: The Revision
Yay for answered questions! :D 1. You should definitely write your larger piece then! And, he seems to be a pretty lame demon after all... they're only powerful when they ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Greetings upon ye
XD You are such a linguist, lol! :D
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Dismay
Maybe pride falling from the heart is a good thing! I find that pride makes us do a lot of stupid things that we, in a more sensible mind, would ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I'm new here
Wait, aren't you going to answer my questions? ;)
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Greetings upon ye
Ooh! I am reading a translation of Beowolf now, by Heaney. My professor says it's one of the best translations out there because it primarily uses English words to express ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Uh... hello?
Who needs a shaved kitty when you can have a sphinx kitty? :D Check them out! A kitten: ...okay, so I admit it. They're kind of creepy, but hey! At ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I take it all back.
Aww... a sad poem about unrequited love! :( One thing that I noticed about this poem is that there are a lot of I's in it. I mean, there are ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Reomi: Prologue [new]
Whooooops. I critiqued the wrong one. xD Anyway, now I am on the right one! And yes, it is tons better! Good job editing. :D Also, you're not that bad ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Reomi Prologue
Hey paulop! :D Okay, so basically the review that silverkey gave you was really, really good and you should follow all the grammar advice she gave you! It's really helpful. ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I'm new here
Ooh, that sounds traumatizing, lol. I think my seven-year-old self would die from shame if I had to introduce myself to my classmates. Not that I wouldn't do it, I ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Last Moments
Eli! I am going to bug you about this, because if I don't, who will?! Basically, you need to do spell check and check your grammar. Just glancing over it, ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Characters in my next novel =)
Uh oh... as a twin myself, I can say with certainty that twins with their heads together are in no way to be trusted! It's just bad news for all. ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Unspeakable
Hey RileyJ! :D Okay, so I was reading your poem, and I think that it might start off better with these lines: I sat on my porch, unable to bring ...
May 31, 2011