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Re: Sacrifice
Haha, well, I definitely didn't see that one coming! I don't know... it seems really random, like you weren't really sure of what to put, so you decided to make ...
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Re: [deleted]
Locked. Plagiarism.
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Re: [deleted]
Locked. Plagiarism.
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Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
Oooh, science fiction? :D Well... I kind of love the dystopian fiction. I mean, yeah, they don't have anything to do with science fiction, really, but they have so much ...
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Re: deleted.
Locked because of author's request!
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Re: I Forget My Age.
Ooers! I want to see if I can get this. Well... okay, it's kind of confusing, but I at least want to try! :D It seems like you're talking about ...
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Re: Hey there. I'm... who's that there?
I read Animal Farm when I was eight-years-old... yeah, not really the best age for it now. Whenever I try to read it now, I either throw my book on ...
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Re: Notice me, then love.
Hey summerlovely! :D Okay, so this poem! It was mostly about this guy not noticing you and how you yearned for him, right? That definitely sucks... I hate having to ...
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Re: Literary Journal Cover
Smiley! :D Okay, so this may just be me but... well... this seems more like a murder mystery cover for an anthology than something that would be part of the ...
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Re: Angry
Yeah... I have to agree with Janika here, lol. I know you were very impassioned when you wrote it, but for some reason it seems pretty funny to me because ...
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Re: Ashes and Teeth: The Revision
I know, but you know me. I like to pick apart things to death. Also, I don't doubt that he is powerful... trust me! You do not mess with demons. ...
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Re: Ashes and Teeth: The Revision
I don't get it though... where as Satan in the bible, as the fallen most power angel, or did I miss something big? It doesn't seem quite accurate. I mean, ...
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Re: Two loves
Hey flowerchild! :D Okay, so I need to run off to class soon (gack!) but I think the reason why you think the beginning is good and the rest isn't ...
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Re: Not Free
Aw, of course they're normal for you! You're 15-years-old. You're allowed to have minor collapses every once in a while. ;) Now, as far as your poem goes... I think ...
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Re: Joy
Yay for people understanding you and such! :D Anyway, one of the things that struck me for this poem (and there were several things!) was that it was not really ...
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