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Hi Katarina! :D Okay! So this seemed to be a very philosophical poem that dealt with the topic of existentialism! Or... a poem that was so heartbroken it seemed to ...

Hi SkyeDreamer! :D Okay, so this piece is very cute! Very high school, lol. I have to admit I really like the ending. I mean, you go on and on ...

Hey Tori! :D Okay! Just a couple of thoughts (and hopefully I won't be too rambly or whatever). First of all, your English teacher sounds like no fun, lol. Very ...

If I may be the first to say this, the Isle bit reminded me of Sanctum. XD Anyway! Continuing on... Mayor Gallberg was among the last to arrive. You talked ...

SHOUT OUT.

I have two, but one is for Moth and Myth, so yup! I use the Moth and Myth one most because it directly links in with the FB account I ...

Rawr! Okay, so I did a video critique on it. Yup. Link is here: Anyway, the other comment I have is that there are a lot of words that are ...

Thanks for your help, guys. *has a second question* How can I explain that my character was adopted without telling it outright? You could use sibling tensions to bring this ...

Pfft! I was being perfectly serious in my cynicism, I assure you! This question ("Does religion cause more problems than it solves?") is a loaded question because the question points ...

I figured as much! It definitely seemed like you just scraped it together haphazardly. XD I just wanted to let you know that in university, this would probably be a ...

Ack, I am so excited for you!!! :D Anyway, just a quick typo that I had to point out: because of this small burden we bare.

So! I was going to rate this 16+ first, but then I showed someone a bit of the most offending parts and... well... she said it should be rated 18+, ...

Daffodils, preying mantises, and tulips -- oh my! Anyway! I think the best shot of these are the tulips, just because I love the vibrancy of the orange and the ...

You're a really nice colorer! :D Anyway, I really like the fourth one! It's very cute and simple and I love the vibrancy of the colors. Nice work there! For ...

Mayuko is indeed a slippery one! Okay, so just a quick note... the first part of this chapter dragged for me a bit because all it is is just a ...