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MWHAHA! First! :D Anyway! Yup. Emma can't die this soon so they are simply curing Beth and Emma is getting in the way. Why, oh why, they didn't actually knock ...

and briskly walks away. I would get rid of the adjective here! Along the edges are cheap foldable chairs. Cheap, foldable chairs remind me of those dinky plastic ones used ...

They don't really talk to me directly, but they do talk and it's strange. Mostly, I just eavesdrop in. The only reason why they really talk to me is if ...

I was going to introduce Lomones's mate, but... well... yeah. She didn't want to show up. She's quite a private individual! But she'll show up a couple books later. And ...

21. I think. And 2000 replies is pishposh compared to what I've seen on other sites. Surely YWS can do better. IN SOVIET RUSSIA, BETTER CAN DO YWS.

Fury didn’t even begin to cover it. Over and over again, Lomones played the events back in his mind. Yes, he was stupid. He was stupid to believe any of ...

Just a note, this has been revised! :)

Hey Becca! A quick question... is there a prompt associated with this essay? I would love to help get you into college, but they can be strict about being on ...

Hey Super Duper! :D Okay, so! Your poem is really, really, really difficult to read. For one, it's full of gimicky bits. For example, the capitalized beginnings of each line ...

I close YWS... and then quit my internet, just to make sure! Also, chat things are a generally no-no during writing time.

Hi Dakota! Okay, I said that I would look at this... and here I am! I like this overall! The ending, in bold was a bit confusing, but I like ...

Hahah! This was so cute. :) I know this sounds pretty insulting, but I love how shallow you made yourself sound. It made it seem like you had gotten over ...

Nate, you scare me sometimes, lol.

This comes to mind immediately: Very violent, lol... but not at the same time.

Ho-hum, pig's bum...eh? :/ PIG.