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Re: The Tavern
Snoink falls on Priceless, giggling helplessly. "Did someone give her too much alcohol to drink?" Jordan calls out. "Hey, how was I supposed to know what happens when I give ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: DUDE.
YWS revived this post in my feed, for goodness knows what reason. It said that this post had received a "like" when it clearly hasn't. I think it's a conspiracy. ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Help! Need edited by tomorrow!
So! First of all, you are going to want to use spell check on this. There are a lot of spelling errors that can be easily found with spell check. ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Wilde's Prelude - first sentence
The artist is the creator of beautiful things. To reveal art and conceal the artist is art's aim. This is the first line of Oscar Wilde's "The Picture of Dorian ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Has Been Deleted
Locked by author's request!
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Sneak Peek at YWS Renovation
This is so awesome! I can't wait to see this in action. :)
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Knowledge
¡Oy vey! Solv, I love you, but I worry about your English essays! :P Knowledge is one of the most important things in life; it's the key for humans to ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: He Deserved It
Hey sassycat! I realize that you probably had limitations from the contest and everything, but reading this with no context as to what this contest was, I have absolutely no ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Room 219
Hey Wolfdra! :) Maybe the reason why you have writer's block is because you don't really care to go further in your stories? I mean, I read your story and ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
Hahaha. This story, actually, is a perfect example of Mary Sue/Gary Stu syndrome. I am going to have to quote this for future critiques of mine! After all, sometimes this ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: The playground is burning
You're a star! Anyway, a grammatical nitpick: "...say her daughter won’t be going out alone any more."
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: My Best Friend
Hi Kattie! :) A couple things struck me when I was reading your poem! For one, there is a mention of love and losing someone through disinterest (or at least ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
Well... kind of! From the Church documents I read, they seem to admit the psychology aspect of the science, not the biological aspects. Which, kind of makes sense... the Church ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
Wolfdancer>> Evolution doesn't quite work that way! Men will not produce children "naturally" unless they have the equipment to do so (either naturally, in the form of being a hermaphrodite, ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
Er, okay, so I studied genetics at UC Davis. Just graduated, in fact! So, I've done a bunch of genetic engineering classes and all that jazz in a top school ...
Aug 10, 2011
