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Hey lonewolf! I figured I would take a look at your story. :) Anyway, your story is really hard to read because of the grammar. You use periods sparingly, your ...

Hi Poly! :) All right! Out of everything here, I think you could really make the ending much stronger. I mean, let's look at the opening line here: I moaned ...

Haha. If that were my teacher, I would have reported him as the asshole he is. Teachers are supposed to be way more tolerant than that. XD In any case, ...

For the first part of FREAK, it's Vladimir Nabokov. For the second part of FREAK, it's Margaret Mitchell. For the third part of FREAK, it's Stephen King. Um...? XD Altogether ...

There is too much liking going on here.

I compulsively liked your thing, just cuz.

I am a horrible person!

I've changed my mind since my last post. Clearly, 22 is too young to have a serious relationship.

Baroness Ink! Welcome back! :D

Hahahaha. I obviously need to post more then!

Hi! I love this story, so I'm glad to see it here! :) My first comment is that you switch from talking about Jesus in the third person to speaking ...

One time, Nate changed my name to Bacon, because he is obviously a horrible person. xD

You can also ask a mod, if it's a double post, and we'll be happy to delete it for you. :)

Excellent read! :)

I think I love you. Also, if these are just fragments, I think I would be interested in reading the larger project. After all, the way you present these ideas ...