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Hi Spinelli! This kind of reminds me of that line in "Strawberry Fields Forever" when John Lennon says this: No one, I think, is in my tree I mean, it ...

Eek, you're in the middle of editing? Hopefully, my comments won't be totally worthless then! First, the horse makes me sad. I wish no horses were treated like this, ever. ...

You can post it! Just remember to rate it properly (E, 12+, 16+, 18+). :)

Thank you guys so much. Some of you have stated that you felt you knew where the story was going from the beginning. If you had read this without seeing ...

Hi! Do you happen to like Nine Inch Nails, or am I totally off the mark? Anyway! For this poem, I think you can make this much cooler if you ...

I don't understand, Kyllorac. Since when have matters of faith been equivalent to breeding potatoes? :? Your logic doesn't quite make sense to me.

This might just be me, but while I love bare dialogue, this seems to be wanting to be fleshed out. Especially if you continue it! Also, fleshing it out and ...

Hi! I actually think this would serve as a nonfiction story than a poem. Right now, this is a little more than a rant that is in poetic form. Which ...

Hi! You linked this to me, so I'd figure I would comment. I didn't read the rest because you just linked me this. But, I think I have a rough ...

What a lovely Christmas present! You're the best, Nate. :)

Do you think change is unnecessary or impossible? What change are you talking about?

Like I said before, I think the only way they can really institute change is if they are the change. Call me naive, but would it be possible for the ...

Hey Qara! :) For this poem... one of the things that struck me was that all these people seemed to do was they looked at each other and then they ...

Hello! :) Don't worry about the rejections too much... at least they wrote back, right? Many people won't even do that. So, I know it hurts, but just pick yourself ...

Locked. Plagiarized.