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Re: Candle in the Window
Hi Spark! It was really sweet of you to write on such a beautiful topic. :) This probably sounds really geeky, but this totally reminded me of the Dr. Who ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: The Race
Haha, this is neat! I think it actually belongs better in Narrative Poetry, because it deals with a story, but that's just my thoughts. If you want, you can always ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Clouds
Hi Isaac! Okay, so this is pretty interesting! Just a couple of things... first of all, sometimes you capitalize "Me" and "My" and varients of this and sometimes you don't ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Bump in the night.
Hey Amber! :) Okay, so, this is going to be mostly a content review... I hope you don't mind! :) And... um... I like to overthink things. Sorry in advance! ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Snow
Hey Chibi! :) I think, for this particular piece, you don't have enough descriptive imagery. I mean, this is so short that you need to bring out all the descriptive ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Mother
Hey Justis! :) So, a poem about mothers! They can be quite a pain at times. Anyway! I think that if you were more specific about what actually happened, there ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: God vs.Science
Don't take it the wrong way, skwmusic, lol. The reason why Grif and I keep on harping on the whole faith in science issue is because he is an applied ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Our Planet
Hey Em! :D For this poem, you stress the idea of having a planet to each other. However, you repeat this a little too much to the point that I ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: To My Fellow Friends and Writers
Aw, but I liked making a total fool out of myself by being a disrespectful oaf. :( You're no fun, Hayden! Also... er... this isn't really something you can discuss, ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: God vs.Science
that technological and economic advances do not engage in moral teachings This isn't quite true. Morality is a set of agreed-upon standards that one must follow. Though economic and technological ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Galaxy
Let’s look up—do you see that bright pinprick above us? The one that reminds me of the twinkle of your eyes. It’s not just a star—it’s a cluster of stars ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Flying, I crept on high the air
Oooh, I liked this! :) When I first read this through, I have to admit that the concept kind of reminded me of Ecclesiastes, because you have this whole concept ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
As for the nature vs nurture issue, I believe it's a bit of both. There obviously isn't a specific gene that makes you gay, but I think that homosexuality is ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: YWS: Apollo Updates Thread
When my PMs loaded up in two seconds rather than two minutes, I kind of felt a wave of awe. EDIT: Also... I love that it tells me that I ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
That being said, from what I've read it seems likely hat homosexuality isn't caused by a specific gene, but by a whole range of factors, including prenatal factors like hormone ...
Jan 2, 2012
