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Re: Front Line
Hey tonepoem! :) Aha, a war poem! Always very dramatic. Now... er... a couple of things! You decided to write about war, which is really dramatic and everything. War means ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Joining a bad Community
Hey Phil! :) So, this definitely seems quickly done! It was probably so quickly done because of the contest, actually. I don't know if you want to keep it as ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Rural England's knell
I remember seeing this poem! :o Just as a sidenote, I think that you don't have to post the same poem multiple times on YWS... you can definitely use the ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Light Spread Upon Those That Retreat To Their Mists
Ooh... actually I quite liked this! Not sure why it hasn't been reviewed yet, but I'm glad it hasn't, otherwise I probably wouldn't have seen it! Anyway, the way I ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Vegetarianism/Veganism? With or against?
I'm actually more like Kyllorac... if I try to live without red meat, my body kind of goes out of whack. It's weird. So, I can't do that. But, if ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: Identity
Hey SnarkHunter! :) First of all, I would love to see you write this with stanzas and lines and everything, just because you have a bunch of neat rhymes and ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: Equations, or Life as a Rhombus
LOL! I have to say... this reminds me of some of the poems that I wrote when I had way too much math and science homework. You know... when you ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: War Runners
Hey Phil! :) Right now, it looks like you have just a bunch of ideas put into fragments here. You have this weird jekry motion in your poem about war, ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: A Shell I Am
Hey Ninja! :) Okay, this may just be me, but you kept on throwing out all these adjectives about how empty or vacuous or whatever. Which is fine! But, you ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: Does religion do more harm than good?
No matter what anyone believes about anything, I can't seriously believe that they actually believe people would be rational. We are by our very nature irrational human beings, subject to ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: YWS: Apollo Updates Thread
I am going to write a Science Fiction Spiritual Poem now.
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: Twilight <3 or Harry Potter :)?
This is a very important question! :o I would say Harry Potter, because I think the cinematography is overdone in Twilight. But, I haven't seen all the movies, so maybe ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
My points in the last post have a weird discrepancy. :P
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Upon Entering Heaven
Not quite heaven now, is it? ;) Okay, so first of all, you had a bunch of typos. So take another look at your poem! Next... uh... the first stanza ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Insane Labyrinth
Ooer... is this poem kind of like a fan poem for the Hunger Games? I have not read it yet but I know the basic premise so this poem really ...
Jan 9, 2012