Snoink

An avvie for Lavvie! Also, I expect a F-ART.

Silly timezones! XD

Nate. Get to work now.

Oh, Snoink! You seriously were close to those 50 you were talking about. What kept you?! (Well, we both know what did.) (And I'm saying this only because I'd have ...

Oy, I hate it when animals die. :( Though! I am glad it was only a dream! I have to agree with Lavvie here... the stanza did seem a little ...

Ack, we can be our worst enemies, can't we? As far as this goes... I think it might be better if you added some external conflict to this poem! Right ...

Hi! I think I am probably missing something critical here.. Azalea, after all, is an Indian and she seems to understand the sentiments and enjoy them where I (an American) ...

I think we are all born with a selfish, egotistic, and greedy nature which can turn us into monsters if we let it.

That video is neat. ^^;; Anyway, when I was watching the video, I noticed two things that I wanted to bring up. :) My emotions sway over the ocean. And ...

Hey NaRachel! :) Okay! Your poem was a really neat poem. But I must admit that it confused me a little! The two parts of your poem seem weirdly separated ...

I really liked the opening lines! It's very catchy and I love the imagery of poets running out of words, especially since the image is so contradictory. Poets are not ...

Yay! I am glad that you get to stay with your best friend. :) This is so sweet because it puts a conflict at the forefront... you moving out. So, ...

inkwell: That is a more fundamentalist Christian message, which tends to say that there is no religion and that faith should only be a relationship between God and yourself. I ...

Hi ajt! :) I kind of like the format here, where you have him looking at Mimi and thinking about what's going on in her head versus what's going on ...

Hey Whitney! :) Okay! So, I have to admit... I've been the recipient of a best friend poem before, and I was tickled pink. So, if you give this to ...