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I like the title. And the poem. It reminds me of some Beatles music... "A Day in the Life"... *salivates* Translation: Me gusta mucho.

This was my favorite part: orbit the planetary track elliptical emotional crap satellites will crash and our routine will break The fourth line, that is. Mostly because it looks like ...

The repetition works, except for this line, since it seems too long... Passes me by and I scream out “God, you suck! God, you suck!” I don't know. I think ...

I know how much you just love my critiques on poetry, so I won't say much. :P It was long... very long... but the strange way it was held together ...

Once again, I feel my mind spin Heavy with new knowledge Of… derivatives And I’m not sure that I like it. On one hand, it is good. I can handle ...

They do... my friend showed me some disgusting sites about that too. @_@

First of all, this reminds me of some stories I did a little bit back, before all the angst began permeating my teenage life. It written in an upbeat manner, ...

When I was thirteen, I came up with this process and wrote an article about it. I'm sure there's a lot of errors in it, but there's a couple of ...

:P I have to agree with Rei here. Grades, in the long run, mean nothing. It's what you do with that knowledge you earn which means something. So, while I ...

Your long story is not that long. I can look over it in my spare time if you want. How much of a critique would you like? By the way, ...

1984 His Dark Materials (series) Narnia (series) The Dark Lord of Derkholm (OMG, this book is SOOOOO funny and sad and everything! I love it!) The Elements of Style - ...

LOL! A mí me gusta mucho! A surprise ending that is not the typical, "Omg, my life is so horrible so I have to die." It actually shows... passion! Of ...

Well... she was posed in a position as if she had something to show... but she didn't. It looked rather stange. Watch... all the guys in YWS are trying to ...

OMG! When I typed in my name, the first thing I saw was the naked top part of a female. Yep. And she had such small breasts! I mean really... ...

When I was 12, I played kick the can :D I also dressed, and still do, like a dork! I always thought you looked cute...