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Thanks for the comments! Concertchick16: thanks for noticing. That sentence has always been awkward. I'm not sure that your way will work (not your fault, mind you; I was the ...

Oh yes... Solomon was very interesting...

Just remember: the light at the end of the tunnel may be an oncoming train.

Quick critique! In the title, the word "sentence" is spelled wrong. Change it. ‘Miss Emily Taylor is sentenced to 7 years transportation to Australia for stealing the following items: 1 ...

Hmm... I had an experience like that in California. It's not exclusive to where you live. As far as the story? You were much too repetitive. Now, I know that ...

Many of the best critiquers (i.e. the people who will actually sit down and review work on YWS) are under 18, so there's really no threat. Most of the ones ...

They're ziggy-zaggy. ;) Do you jump up and down screaming "I'M A LIZARD!!!"

It looks nice and pretty! I like the layout a lot. But... um... what about the age limit? Is there any? The site said it was for older writers, the ...

Er... I'm for the "they need help." True, it may also be a cry for attention, but a better word would be "a cry for help." I don't recommend it, ...

^ Changed her avvie...

*whimpers* No red...

Author's Note: This piece is old and abandoned. Enjoy this bit of writing practice by a younger Snoink, if you so desire, but critiques and any other insults or suggestions ...

It's sort of like God in a way. Some can, others can't. Or won't. Go figure. Anyway! Rules are meant to keep people under some sort of order, not to ...

I will be immortal. In my ideas, mind you. But I hope/pray I don't have to live forever, because that would be bad...

"At least I'm not as bad as you..." "If my grammar is incorrect, I willfully did it that way!" "Wait... did you just say bad was a bad word to ...