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There was once this guy who appeared to have no love at all. Even with his dog, there appeared to be no connection. He was easy-going, smart, and had everything ...

Do you notice that a pet's natural looks are more admired than a human's natural looks? We smother ourselves in make up to hide ourselves. Maybe the reason why we ...

Oh, you can definitely help! But you don't have to go out to different parts of the world. You can start in the community. One of the simplest things you ...

I think the last line can be better if there's less words. It just seems a little wordy; less is more. But I did like it. As Gal said, deliciously ...

That dog? Hmph! Not anymore!

Pretty poem! Simple, good metering, not too forced, and lovely imagery. Pretty good job there... ;)

10/10 What can I say? Pink Floyd = awesome

No... Nate is by far the cutest guy here. ^_______________^ And that dog is adorable!

I would trim this stanza down, if only to give it more of a metered feel: At even the most hardworking person. It just seems too long.

LOL! I'm tempted to say, it's a really cute story, but I'm afraid Searria might that I'm patronizing. Let me explain: First of all, I think this is a very ...

It is enlightening -- and it does make you wonder. It also makes me want to help out in my community more. Oh! If only I had more bodies!

Incan, fascinating! I never thought of that before. Awesome stuff. Sorry mommy! sorry Qi! mutters* he started it J. haux we must have been typing at the same time yours ...

I forced Ari to do an intensive interview. Here are the results! Have fun... What words would you use to describe yourself? Short, fun, silly, loud, laughing, grandiloquent, loving, hard-working, ...