Snoink

He's old. And he's really smart but rather creepy - for those who read my blog any, think Ralph. *shivers*

I sent the critique on Wednesday actually, lol. :P The contents in there? Description of characters, motion and otherwise. Why adverbs are needed. How lots of description tends to make ...

Yeah... say why you don't like it. One reason I am particularly attracted to this name is because it has Latin roots instead of biblical ones, and it means "the ...

Is apparently dead. Otherwise he wouldn't be in limbo.

For a second, I thought it said cow, and it was soooooo funny... but then I reread it. XD Even so, interesting imagery. :)

Oh, come on Qi! It's 42! ...sarcasm, peoples, sarcasm. And no, you are not a heathen. If someone calls you that, I'll... er... well, I would punch them in the ...

Yeah... once more, obsessive compulsiveness in writers is overvalued. What do you think of this name?

But sparrow doesn't rhyme... XD It's good for a first try. I remember my first real poem... *shudders* I was about your age, and it sucked. LOL! It was funny ...

ARGH! Okay, I was almost done with the critique, but then the stupid internet program decided to die on me. So! Let's make this quickish! A warning: I am being ...

8/10 Deep...

For chapter one! The first thing I noticed was there was lots of description, but hardly any description for characters. I'm not sure whether I like it or not... all ...

5/10 What's with the red streaks on his face? :?

I'm bumping this so that I'll see it easily for the next time I get on the computer. I'll comment on it when I have time.

Interesting... Reality sucks. If we live completely in reality, then there are no ideas. How many times have pieces of art inspired? And we're not just talking about pictures. How ...

Really big, may weigh from 800+ lb or more! Shaggy hair, and a REALLY cute snout. :) Do you know how to cook well?