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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nightfall

    From the Suns’ funeral pyre. Should be "Sun's." The beauty from the Sun born. I think it's borne. Yet as I weep I look again, At the sky above my ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Other Re: Writing Challenge 11/7

    SNOINK IS A 40 YEAR OLD MAN AP Today, a man, suspected of child molestation, was arrested. Known as "Snoink" on the internet, he posed as a 17 year old ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Writing Tips Re: How to make reviewers hate you...

    Do you want to really get harsh critiques that are positively insulting? Do you want to make writing forums curse and swear at you? Do you want to get the ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Writing Tips Re: Fragments-Are they grammatically wrong?

    And remember, if you are going to use them, please you them carefully. Just by adding a period, it adds a dramatic pause. Very useful, but it can be overdone. ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: A Perfect World

    Okay! Impressions of Jessica Jessica is a pacifist, dreamer, and a loner. Now, if I were not so bored or braindead, I would stop there. Unfortunately for you, that is ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: Lick the Member above ya!

    BBQ chicken...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • NovMo Archives Re: Bits and Pieces of my story

    YAY! It's really random... it reminds me of your blog. XD

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Due North

    SK, you couldn't find grammatical errors? :roll: I was swimming in them! That it’s blade would never taste the blood that gives it strength. Nope, "its blade." It has been ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Alice

    The lack of grammar killed it. There were sentences that weren't finished with a period that just went on and on and on. I can understand missing several commas, but ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The 12 Days of Christmas- Prologue

    Ha ha ha... Okay, I am absolutely going to rip this to shreads. And I am going to have fun doing it! First person is a little bit tricky to ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • NovMo Archives Re: A Few Questions (and yeah, they're actually...questions...)

    Of course Desmond is a guy's name! After all, in the Beatles song, Ob La Di, they talk about Desmond and Molly. :)

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: hey, new person looking for help!

    I think I've seen you on TYWC, hehe. Well, first of all, this is a pretty small forum, so there's definitely a community aspect. It's really cool! We have blogs ...

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lord, Let It Rain

    It's too short for criticism, lol. :P

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: Dusky's sweet sixteen

    Sixteen is supposed to be the worst year for many... Good luck! :)

    Nov 11, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: :P

    f*ck f - asertisk - c - k. f*ck :shock: Qi's right! Bleah is the antiderivative to that! So when: f(fu*ck) = f'(bleah) It all makes sense now...

    Nov 11, 2005


One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World