Snoink

^ 8/10 It looks like chicken little with PMS, lol.

^ Had an avvie no one seemed to like... I forgot what it was though, lol. :P

If you used parallelism, it would be much better. I.E. When I was sad You gave me that hope When I was mad You gave me peace. When I was ...

this is great i will come back to this. *follows Haze and also bookmarks this page* *Also follows Emma and bookmarks this page* Heh heh, I always try to avoid ...

If I critique something, I want people to see it. :?

And Snoink, when you title your topic "Jesus is Republican," you're implying that the debate will talk about what political affiliation Christ would have. If you didn't want that to ...

That's because, psychologically, when you know you're going to be okay, you're more likely to heal. :)

Oh! Sorry. Lorca is this beautiful Spanish playwright/poet. His work is simply amazing, and I happen to be doing one of plays, "Bodas de Sangre" so I get to look ...

HA! The snowman is awesome. I like your third picture too. :) Nice mellow colors...

It was interesting. The first line grabbed me. I didn't think these meshed in with the poem well: I'm just a dreamer, living in the land of the dead, I'm ...

Ah! Finally, a metered poem. 3,6,3,6. So, what is my suggestion? The last line sounds awkward. I think, if you mess around with the word choice a little bit, it ...

I don't think these lines really belong: You left me here To wait and wave. First of all, Carmina is right. It's a tragic comedy. But it's tragic, not because ...

:shock: Oh! This is pretty! It reminds me of Lorca. :) Then again, it would seeing that it's sort of a play, but mostly poetry... but even so! ¡Buen trabajo!

If it happened to me, I would be embarrassed because I would feel even more excluded, plus all eyes would be on me. If you're an outsider, you generally do ...

XD Um... yeah. I found this funny, but I just had a chemistry exam. I'm guessing this is an anti-emo poem, but it doesn't really display your message enough. It's ...