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Re: Crit the person above you!
^ Of the Beatles, Cell Phones & Love Notes >
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: Of the Beatles, Cell Phones & Love Notes
*cringes* Sam, you have improved SO much...
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: X-mas present - thanks!
Lol! I know he'll get a kick of it -- but it makes you nervous too, see? *blushes* And my dad? He's one of the "unseen" politicians who works in ...
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: Christmas List
Beatles CDs, toothbrushes, and floss. And chocolate.
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: Writing Challenge 11/21 (Elizabeth Mathers Rant)
My eyes! My eyes!
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: Pillowcase Dog.
When I first read this, I thought that you meant you loved the girl because she abused animals! XD With that said, interesting idea. I love the title. I just ...
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: 20K
Yep... I officially have no life. XD
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: YWS-1
Griffin crashed into the glass panel protecting the gravity drive. We all groaned... blood from his bloody nose was floating in space. Boni Bee looked at it thoughtfullly. "We should ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Know what really grinds my gears?
A generic form letter/madlib! Try it, but DO NOT SCROLL DOWN. Greeting: Noun: Verb: Noun: Adjective: Noun: Verb: Noun: Adjective: Verb: Noun: Adverb: Celebrity name: Okay, filled it out? Fill ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: New Storybook
I want an ice cream cone.
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: YWS-1
"Um... what about gravity?" I was floating, and to be honest, I felt kind of... strange. I was upside down and slowly being driven crazy. I knew that, in Earth, ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: A Short Story Entitled: A Beggar's Tale
Don't use &; use and. And.. I know that this is a story about Merlin, but... well... quite honestly, there is no story. It's just a longer-than-usual description. I would ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Asher
Good... um... made me want to write... So... I'll critique this later and write instead, eh? But it reminds me of FREAK! A sci fi that isn't a sci fi! ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Ladida...titles are irrelevent!
When you begin, we're not sure who the narrator is. As the poem develops, you learn about the narrator, etc. I guess what really bugs me is the lack of ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Know what really grinds my gears?
No, that would be "Do unto others as you would HAVE THEM do unto you." BIG difference. XD It was a joke... the opposite of what Jesus said, thus the ...
Nov 21, 2005
