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Force yourself to write. Tell yourself that this is going to be the crappiest writing ever, and write it, just for laughs. You'll find that you get it done. Join ...

I'm a bad writer...

Oops... XD Um... I have no idea what I'm saying, lol. 10/10 just because!

Definitely my favorite story that I have ever read on this site. Try his other story, lol. It's better. Which means... POST MORE STORIES! XD

XD Um... first of all, I haven't read many of the other chapters, so this seems a little... sudden. But, since I don't know, you've probably just left it on ...

10/10, because the bible is pretty. :) I first thought it was from psalms, lol.

"Miss Lucy" played by Pete Fountain

What in the world does [sic] mean when it's placed after a word?

hi sam...erm...this is...different. I can't say as it's my favorite thing you've ever written, but I have confidence that it will grow steadily better. And yeah...new title definately in order. ...

I think the fourth stanza is misplaced. I would rather see the third and fifth stanzas together than third, fourth, and fifth. I don't know... it seems to be misplaced. ...

Er... yeah. I love making fun of poems like this. I think you should submit something else in the writing contest. Generally, people don't go for this kind of stuff ...

^ Is one of the reviewers of YWS! *high fives*

And then there's me, and goodness knows, I'm a n00b. :P

I bumped into a member. "Oh... hi...!" What was her name again? "...Haze!" She blinked. "It's Emma now." What the...? Suddenly Fontroy ran into me.

Ooo... nice introduction. Topics I want to see expanded? "In these video games, the character is supposedly allowed to play out our innermost desires, which are then informed or, in ...